From 7ca5a2bd0290221f310b756d0d5b13e98dcc3ed7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dan Brown <ssddanbrown@googlemail.com>
Date: Wed, 7 May 2025 14:56:25 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Fixed & adjusted a range of casing/wording on the homepage

---
 src/views/Landing/DemoHistory.jsx     |  2 +-
 src/views/Landing/DemoMyChore.jsx     |  2 +-
 src/views/Landing/FeaturesSection.jsx | 10 +++++-----
 src/views/Landing/GettingStarted.jsx  | 16 ++++++++--------
 4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/views/Landing/DemoHistory.jsx b/src/views/Landing/DemoHistory.jsx
index 4e0f45e..57ae8c8 100644
--- a/src/views/Landing/DemoHistory.jsx
+++ b/src/views/Landing/DemoHistory.jsx
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ const DemoHistory = () => {
           data-aos='fade-left'
         >
           <Typography level='h3' textAlign='center' sx={{ mt: 2, mb: 4 }}>
-            History with a purpose
+            History with a Purpose
           </Typography>
           <Typography level='body-lg' textAlign='center' sx={{ mb: 4 }}>
             Keep track of all your chores and tasks with ease. Donetick records
diff --git a/src/views/Landing/DemoMyChore.jsx b/src/views/Landing/DemoMyChore.jsx
index be56cae..b63688b 100644
--- a/src/views/Landing/DemoMyChore.jsx
+++ b/src/views/Landing/DemoMyChore.jsx
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ const DemoMyChore = () => {
           data-aos='fade-left'
         >
           <Typography level='h3' textAlign='center' sx={{ mt: 2, mb: 4 }}>
-            Glance at your task and chores
+            Glance at Your Task and Chores
           </Typography>
           <Typography level='body-lg' textAlign='center' sx={{ mb: 4 }}>
             Main view prioritize tasks due today, followed by overdue ones, and
diff --git a/src/views/Landing/FeaturesSection.jsx b/src/views/Landing/FeaturesSection.jsx
index dbabd43..c2f45b6 100644
--- a/src/views/Landing/FeaturesSection.jsx
+++ b/src/views/Landing/FeaturesSection.jsx
@@ -33,31 +33,31 @@ const CardData = [
   {
     title: 'Circles: Your Task Hub',
     description:
-      'build with sharing in mind. invite other to the circle and you can assign tasks to each other. and only see the tasks the should be shared',
+      'Built with sharing in mind. Invite others a circle so you can assign tasks to each other, only seeing the tasks the should be shared.',
     icon: GroupRounded,
   },
   {
     title: 'Track Your Progress',
     description:
-      'View a history of completed tasks. or use things to track simply things!',
+      "See a full history of completed tasks so you can keep track of what's been achieved!",
     icon: HistoryRounded,
   },
   {
     title: 'Automated Task Scheduling',
     description:
-      'Set up Tasks to repeat daily, weekly, or monthly, or maybe specifc day in specifc months? Donetick have a flexible scheduling system',
+      'Set up tasks to repeat daily, weekly, monthly, or even specific days in specific months? Donetick has a flexible scheduling system.',
     icon: AutoAwesomeMosaicOutlined,
   },
   {
     title: 'Automated Task Assignment',
     description:
-      'For shared tasks, Donetick can randomly rotate assignments or choose based on last completion or least assigned.',
+      'For shared tasks Donetick can randomly rotate assignments, or choose based on last completion or least assigned.',
     icon: AutoAwesomeRounded,
   },
   {
     title: 'Integrations & Webhooks',
     description:
-      'Donetick can update things programmatically with API call. you can update things from other services like IFTTT, Homeassistant or even your own service',
+      'Donetick can update things programmatically with API calls. It can integrate with IFTTT, Home Assistant or even your own services.',
     icon: Webhook,
   },
 ]
diff --git a/src/views/Landing/GettingStarted.jsx b/src/views/Landing/GettingStarted.jsx
index ede365d..4811e61 100644
--- a/src/views/Landing/GettingStarted.jsx
+++ b/src/views/Landing/GettingStarted.jsx
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ const GettingStarted = () => {
       title: 'Donetick Web',
       icon: <Cloud style={{ fontSize: '48px' }} />,
       description:
-        'The easiest way! just create account and start using DoneTick',
+        'The easiest way! Just create account and start using Donetick',
       button: (
         <Button
           size='lg'
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ const GettingStarted = () => {
     {
       title: 'Selfhosted',
       icon: <Storage style={{ fontSize: '48px' }} />,
-      description: 'Download the binary and manage your own DoneTick instance',
+      description: 'Download the binary and manage your own Donetick instance',
       button: (
         <Button
           size='lg'
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ const GettingStarted = () => {
       title: 'Hassio Addon',
       icon: <AddHome style={{ fontSize: '48px' }} />,
       description:
-        'have Home Assistant? install DoneTick as a Home Assistant Addon with single click',
+        'Have Home Assistant? Install Donetick as a Home Assistant Addon with single click',
       button: (
         <Button
           size='lg'
@@ -143,11 +143,11 @@ const GettingStarted = () => {
 
       <Box maxWidth={'lg'} sx={{ mb: 8 }}>
         <Typography level='body-md' color='neutral'>
-          you can start using DoneTick in multiple ways, easiest way is to use
-          Donetick Web and you can start in seconds, or if you are into
-          selfhosting you can download the binary and run it on your own server,
-          or if you are using Home Assistant you can install DoneTick as a Home
-          Assistant Addon
+          You can start using Donetick in multiple ways, the easiest of which is
+          to use Donetick Web so you can get started in seconds, or if you are
+          into selfhosting you can download the binary and run it on your own
+          server, or if you are using Home Assistant you can install Donetick as
+          a Home Assistant Addon
         </Typography>
         <div data-aos-id-getting-started-container>
           <Grid container spacing={4} mt={4}>